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Prototype 4th Apr 2016, 9:17 AM edit delete
Prototype

As the episode start we time skip forward a bit. Busty is now apparently free from the spider dungeon and not preggers any more. Just how all that unfolded will be revealed on the upcoming pages.

Thanks for reading!

Comments:

kidsalot
mystery
I'm liking this, you are keeping it Dirty, suspenseful and mysterious all at the same time, i applaud you, nice work.

Prototype

That is high praise. Thank you!

NoFace

On the plus side both you and Amy's boobs got bigger.

Guest

I was looking through the spider scene and unless I'm losing my mind I thought there was another page or a panel where Busty has one blast in her mouth and tongue. Am I losing it or was there more action on page 23 originally?

Prototype


You are correct, I've deleted one page.

The reason for that is I found that when reading the episode I felt the page went a bit too far and became too nasty. It wasn't really funny, goofy or cute which is what I want the comic to be.

Guest

Ok, I understand. That's too bad because I liked that page.

Prototype


You can view the deleted page here:

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Guest

You are awesome, ty


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